Persuasive Essay about 100 billion dollars
100 billion dollars is a very large sum of money and what would a grade 11 student in Huron county do with 100 billion dollars? More specifically, what would a grade 11 student named David Gauthier do with 100 billion dollars? I would hazard a guess that he would do lots of things with said 100 billion dollars.
Well first off why did you give it to him in the first place? Was it trust? Maybe it was just that you had to give it to someone and you pulled his name out of a hat and he received that sum of money? Well saying that he is a very trustworthy and honourable person so he would proceed to fix much of the infrastructure within Huron county. Who would not love having new roads and all that without having to worry about potholes and other things. As well giving money to the YMCA in Goderich to support the Celebrating the Youth program to give scholarships to graduating students. As well as give money to the Strong Kids Campaign to help families send their kids to camps or allowing kids to participate in swimming lessons.
So as you, Mr. Lobb, can see, David Gauthier is a very good person to give that 100 billion dollars to because with it you would see kids succeed in life, and you would be able to drive on nice smooth roads without ruining you nice precious car all day.
Some good ideas here.
ReplyDeleteYou repeat 100 billion dollars a little too often in the first paragraph.
A number of minor spelling and grammar issues - need to check your work over before submission.
This font is TOO hard for me to read. Please switch over to a more readable font.
A little more use of reference and example would improve.